Really liked it! really sounded Death Cab Cutie which is only good. nice lyrics too. the off tune part in the guitar melody irritated me a bit at first but other than that all i can say is congratulations on another good song.
OK, but nothing more
well, I don't like synth strings, sounds pretty weak and the fact that you only had synt strings as instrument made it even worse, you need something to backup the weakness of the strings.
The melody and all didn't really impress me either... a piano melody playing a top of the string melody would be good. Although my not to kind words abotu the song i can't really say it's bad but neither can i say it's good... but as you wrote it would fit pretty well with a 'rain' sound effect. Hope to see more from you in the future.
The synth strings was the whole point. It was compiled so an actor could talk over it.
well, to be honest nothing about this song was good, the drumbeat was boring and repetive, the melody was also repetive and boring, the string line was like all the others and generally crap... however don't stop making music just because bad reviews, music skills come with time... so keep on
what can i say?
A great piece of piano music, even if it at some parts got a little off, and might not have been to varied, anyway you got some talent and i hope to hear more stuff from you in the future.
thanks for your recview, and indeed, you will hear more from me, check out OSZVVHS for example.
I liked it, both rythm and lead(perhaps expect the end) sounded good, as for the lyrics, i didn't really hear what you were singing(well, i wasn't paying attention.), but it sounded sort of good. short but sweet. looking forward to more stuff by you!
thanks appreciate the review. yeah the lyrics were just made up at the time anyway so it probly wont make sense :)
The guitar play was good but not very varied and got repetive pretty fast. and i didn't like the drumbeat, sounded too much like a dance beat. otherwise good work!
Hey, thanks. Yeah, I should have left the drumbeat out. I thought it would make you feel like your back on the saddle and headed through the desert. It took a while to create and alot of screw ups. But, I think it was a pretty good success. Thank you for listening to my tunes. There is more coming!
I would prefer a more classical approach, with other words skip the drum and bass... it makes it sounds like something real cheezy from the 90's.
And the piano play all too simple and boring.
Good work on the strings though especially that middle part. but all together it was a good song, although i hate the midi sound to it, but i guess there's not much you can do about that.
I dub this my worst ever serious track.. though it has more reviews than the others.
CONCENTRATE ON THE GOOD STUFF PEOPLE.
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