OK, but nothing more
well, I don't like synth strings, sounds pretty weak and the fact that you only had synt strings as instrument made it even worse, you need something to backup the weakness of the strings.
The melody and all didn't really impress me either... a piano melody playing a top of the string melody would be good. Although my not to kind words abotu the song i can't really say it's bad but neither can i say it's good... but as you wrote it would fit pretty well with a 'rain' sound effect. Hope to see more from you in the future.